Shelly's Stories
A series of Fan Fictions about JBJ, the band Bon Jovi and other non FF writings. These writings are purely works of fictions and as such are only intrepretions of the artists I write about. I mean no disrespect to the artist's family or friends. Since we all love feedback, I implore you to post your comments in the comments section. It is the only way for me to know what you think of my writing and how I can make it better. Thanks for reading. Enjoy the ride.
Tuesday, August 10, 2010
Sunday, August 8, 2010
Enjoy this story!
Enjoy the special interview that Trina's friend Darryl Owens conducted for Philly Post.
It's called Rock Star Chronicles
you can find it at this link
It's called Rock Star Chronicles
you can find it at this link
Wednesday, June 2, 2010
A Long time...But a request
Hi Jovi friends.
While we are in the midst of probably the most rocking tour in a long time from Bon Jovi, i know we've been very busy.
I'm sorry i haven't been posting much on Stay. The story because of real life responsibilities and because i'm in the middle of doing other projects, the story is on hiatus for now.
I just came back from an awesome show at the New Meadowlands Stadium. Everyone if you can, I encourage everyone if possible to see if only once, to see Bon Jovi in their home state. They put on a great show. And the new stadium is fantastic!!!!!
I have a request for everyone. My friends at, Jovination, which is the best unofficial Bon Jovi fan club around, are now selling Jovination official merchandise at zazzle.com
http://www.zazzle.com/angelsdesigns/gifts
please check it out....I'll actually be back. With a little something for all the Trina fans in a couple of days.
Take care and as always thanks for reading.
Love,
Shelly. xoxox
While we are in the midst of probably the most rocking tour in a long time from Bon Jovi, i know we've been very busy.
I'm sorry i haven't been posting much on Stay. The story because of real life responsibilities and because i'm in the middle of doing other projects, the story is on hiatus for now.
I just came back from an awesome show at the New Meadowlands Stadium. Everyone if you can, I encourage everyone if possible to see if only once, to see Bon Jovi in their home state. They put on a great show. And the new stadium is fantastic!!!!!
I have a request for everyone. My friends at, Jovination, which is the best unofficial Bon Jovi fan club around, are now selling Jovination official merchandise at zazzle.com
http://www.zazzle.com/angelsdesigns/gifts
please check it out....I'll actually be back. With a little something for all the Trina fans in a couple of days.
Take care and as always thanks for reading.
Love,
Shelly. xoxox
Monday, January 11, 2010
New Chapter of Stay is up!!
Sunday, November 22, 2009
Should I continue Nano? and finally an excerpt
It's been a few days since I've posted how i'm doing for National Writing Month.
Not really in a slump going into the third week, but the story as written if you can believe it, is nearly done.
Since the current plot and original outline begin as Jace and Sara have broken up, I feel that the story would be better served if I showed the reader their entire story including how they broke up rather than just telling it through the characters. (Thanks to Jill Noble at Noble Romance Publishing for giving new writers these tips in recent interviews and on her radio show! A must for any new writer.)
And that introduces us to Lil. Sara's best friend and a single mother. She's a complex character that I have had a blast writing the last few days.
The way I have her in my story now she's a minor player, but in actuality she's a huge reason for why the main characters are struggling at the moment.
I'm very proud of this story and I don't want rush it. Jace, Sara, Matt and the rest of the characters are so three dimensional and a lot of fun to write.
So I'm going to finish it, re-outline, tighten it up a lot, and re-work it. And finally,because i've promised...(sorry it's rough...be warned now)
Here's an excerpt between Sara and Jace at the beginning of the first chapter. Enjoy and comment freely!!!
Part of Ch 1 One!!!
A center, and co-captain of the Junior league team called the Haverton Mustangs, the Haverton Falls Classic held every Christmas Day was in Jace’s opinion, his last chance at ever getting signed with a pro team.
His mind reminisced with a bit of sadness at the years he wasted being short-tempered, overly confident and a hard partier.
With his athletic body and ebony colored hair, the chestnut brown eyes attempted to remain focus on the task at hand.
The sun rose over the Lake, turning it gradually to a light purple hue. Continuing to practice drills along a imaginary blue line that he could only see, Jace felt confident that he and his team would beat the Macon Wildcats for the Classic Cup easily.
Ninety minutes now passed and Jace was finishing up his conditioning drills with a long skate around the Lake before he went home.
She passed by him in a pink flash. So quickly, that he did a double take. The look of accomplishment and contentment he had suddenly turned into a look of disdain and dread for the young woman that skirted past him.
They were together for a year. Never had he fell so hard for someone. She was young at 20, he was young at 22. The things they did to one another hurt and complicated things between them. She loved him so intensely. He wanted to commit to being a couple, but couldn’t do it without his temper or giving her a ridiculous ultimatium.
Wearing a pink parka jacket with a white hat and gloves, Sara Reilly skated around her ex-boyfriend taunting him relentlessly. Jace’s eyes narrowed, his lips pursed tightly as to not say something more offensive to her than he normally did.
“What the hell are you doing here Sara?”
She laughed. ”Skating. And you Jace?”
He began to skate away from her. He was in no mood to deal drama. Especially from her.
“Leaving!”
She stopped directly in front of him, her blue eyes locked mischievously with his.
For most people the look Jace was giving her would twart them away, however she ignored it and in fact reveled in it.
Jesting, she replied. “Aww, not now. I was going to see if you wanted to play with me a little before you went to practice.”
He rolled his eyes and continued off the ice. She quickly trailed behind him in an attempt to catch up.
“Oh c’mon Jace, I’m teasing. You know me.”
“Yeah, unfortunately I do. “
Not really in a slump going into the third week, but the story as written if you can believe it, is nearly done.
Since the current plot and original outline begin as Jace and Sara have broken up, I feel that the story would be better served if I showed the reader their entire story including how they broke up rather than just telling it through the characters. (Thanks to Jill Noble at Noble Romance Publishing for giving new writers these tips in recent interviews and on her radio show! A must for any new writer.)
And that introduces us to Lil. Sara's best friend and a single mother. She's a complex character that I have had a blast writing the last few days.
The way I have her in my story now she's a minor player, but in actuality she's a huge reason for why the main characters are struggling at the moment.
I'm very proud of this story and I don't want rush it. Jace, Sara, Matt and the rest of the characters are so three dimensional and a lot of fun to write.
So I'm going to finish it, re-outline, tighten it up a lot, and re-work it. And finally,because i've promised...(sorry it's rough...be warned now)
Here's an excerpt between Sara and Jace at the beginning of the first chapter. Enjoy and comment freely!!!
Part of Ch 1 One!!!
A center, and co-captain of the Junior league team called the Haverton Mustangs, the Haverton Falls Classic held every Christmas Day was in Jace’s opinion, his last chance at ever getting signed with a pro team.
His mind reminisced with a bit of sadness at the years he wasted being short-tempered, overly confident and a hard partier.
With his athletic body and ebony colored hair, the chestnut brown eyes attempted to remain focus on the task at hand.
The sun rose over the Lake, turning it gradually to a light purple hue. Continuing to practice drills along a imaginary blue line that he could only see, Jace felt confident that he and his team would beat the Macon Wildcats for the Classic Cup easily.
Ninety minutes now passed and Jace was finishing up his conditioning drills with a long skate around the Lake before he went home.
She passed by him in a pink flash. So quickly, that he did a double take. The look of accomplishment and contentment he had suddenly turned into a look of disdain and dread for the young woman that skirted past him.
They were together for a year. Never had he fell so hard for someone. She was young at 20, he was young at 22. The things they did to one another hurt and complicated things between them. She loved him so intensely. He wanted to commit to being a couple, but couldn’t do it without his temper or giving her a ridiculous ultimatium.
Wearing a pink parka jacket with a white hat and gloves, Sara Reilly skated around her ex-boyfriend taunting him relentlessly. Jace’s eyes narrowed, his lips pursed tightly as to not say something more offensive to her than he normally did.
“What the hell are you doing here Sara?”
She laughed. ”Skating. And you Jace?”
He began to skate away from her. He was in no mood to deal drama. Especially from her.
“Leaving!”
She stopped directly in front of him, her blue eyes locked mischievously with his.
For most people the look Jace was giving her would twart them away, however she ignored it and in fact reveled in it.
Jesting, she replied. “Aww, not now. I was going to see if you wanted to play with me a little before you went to practice.”
He rolled his eyes and continued off the ice. She quickly trailed behind him in an attempt to catch up.
“Oh c’mon Jace, I’m teasing. You know me.”
“Yeah, unfortunately I do. “
Sunday, November 15, 2009
wrote 5753 words on 11/15
Making up for lost time....Was very very productive.
Story is now really coming along. Everyone is right, the 2nd week is the most difficult.
I had a total of 20,310 as of 11/15 and will be writing some more early tomorrow after some errands.
Pretty proud.
Story is now really coming along. Everyone is right, the 2nd week is the most difficult.
I had a total of 20,310 as of 11/15 and will be writing some more early tomorrow after some errands.
Pretty proud.
Wednesday, November 11, 2009
as of 11/11 doing ok
i had problems with the 5th chapter of my story, i've always had issues w/descriptions and it at times it takes me forever to write or describe exactly how a scene is playing around my head.
But tonight, after working on it. I think i got it and was able to move on.
So much that I wrote tonight 2,2021 giving me a word count so far 14,557. I wanted to be at 15,000 today.
But due to real life...I'll take it.
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